The Keepers In this space is likely to appear an original fantasy story, now completed and being given final editing after comments by trial readers. Of course it may be accepted by a publisher (cough splutter) but if not, it will become donation ware . Alternatively one could place half the story here and hand print and sell the whole book on request.
Sadly, I think this might break the flow of the story. It is also tempting to place here the first chapters, or just something, to get some reader reaction, but the story develops and changes as it goes. There is some hint of the flavour at the start, but the point of it all does not emerge until the whole thing is taken in. You are meant to grab your readers in the first page, but ... or maybe there is enough .... hmmm
David W Lawrence. December 2003 Link back to home ( index) page